All Comments on 'I Came for your Soul'

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MaonaighMaonaighover 4 years ago
Great story...

...with a nice twist at the end (who could have imagined Hell being more desirable than Heaven?). May Daniel and Erea have an enjoyable eternity (and not get too bored after the first trillion years).

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot but short

Would've liked more details and build up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great job

Would you ever consider writing a sequel to this?

CorzineCorpsCorzineCorpsalmost 4 years ago
Another part?

This story is great but a second part would be fantastic.

SatyrDickSatyrDick7 months ago

[27.10.23]

Que Zsexzsay!

11/10!!!!!

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