All Comments on 'I Can't Stop'

by skinnychic

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kingleonidasskingleonidassover 12 years ago
Read all of your stories

Very well played. Keep writing. You have a good imagination. Or a good memory? lol

WankerThankerWankerThankerover 12 years ago
I've always adored intelligent women

You however my dear are brilliant. Or as the Brits would say; "Wizard". I expect more, much, much more from you. Not Anais Nin but very close with a twist you don't pander as she was forced to do. I've always said; "Amateurs do it for love." I think you could carry a novella? Especially if you keep the feminine voice actively erotic.

skinnychicskinnychicover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks, your comments made my day.

I wish I could say these stories were a result of my good memory, but they were only my way of channeling the frustrations of attraction to a man I need to stay away from. But, alas, he was such a delicious muse.

More to come.

My imagination does not rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
A thought

A musing story - well done chic! Would like to read more about your character's inner conflict: her overwhelming desire to tease and tempt that which makes her feel so vulnerable to his "charms". Is she naughty and innocent or a devil in disguise?

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