All Comments on 'I Don't Do April Fools'

by Duleigh

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Nasty56Nasty56about 2 months ago

You always amaze! 5

DoctorAlanDoctorAlanabout 2 months ago

So incredibly perfect for what it is. A sonnet written in erotica. Bless you.

rbloch66rbloch66about 2 months ago

That was a lot of fun! But now I want to know if she took the job and they get married?

DuleighDuleighabout 2 months agoAuthor

I think they will be back on for the next contest. The name of their upcoming adventure is

I Don't Do Nude Day

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Actually, Honey pulled pranks on Arnold all the time. He just doesn't get them.

Tsk. Tsk. Tenses again….

lAnatomistelAnatomisteabout 2 months ago

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hehehehehehe 5-stars

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Yeah, you gotta bring 'em back. This was too good not to.

bigbob2406bigbob2406about 2 months ago

Wonderful stuff !! Thank you very much 😊

WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbumabout 2 months ago

Brilliant writing for the idea of the theme contest 5 *

BlueFox007BlueFox007about 2 months ago

Thank you for a great ride.

5*****

inka2222inka2222about 2 months ago

I generally don't like romance stories with what my kids would call "OP characters", but the author managed to delightfully pull this off by making the story far more over the top than the characters themselves. Good show, chap. 5 stars.

Campus77Campus77about 2 months ago

A brilliant story. Comedy, fantasy, sex and love all in one package. All centered around a theme that worked. Loved the ending.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowabout 2 months ago

Well done, indeed!

Loved it completely!

Bronco56Bronco56about 1 month ago

That was good I definitely enjoyed thw April fools joke

5stars

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 1 month ago

Great story - It had me smiling the whole time. 4.8*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Loved the story but the ending left me wanting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I have enjoyed most of your work, following first Josh and Veronica, then Don and Lahn, and Andi and Paul. What I find interesting is your mention of places close to my home area. A few stories ago you mentioned Coudersport, then in this you mention US Route 6, which passes through Coudersport, and the town of Golden which seems close to Galeton. I graduated from Galeton and have been many of the places near here you've mentioned. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your work!! JC

Ravey19Ravey19about 1 month ago

Excellent, a little odd but I liked it immensely

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

There was some promise, but the writing felt rushed. I'll read another of yours.

AnonymousAnonymous14 days ago

whole lot of wasted words - sorry

DuleighDuleigh14 days agoAuthor

Wasted words? Name some of them, if you can.

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Disabled veteran, learning how to live from the sidelines. Still trying to figure out if I'm writing these stories, or if these stories are writing me. I've given them free rein to flow and now it's time to start publishing, The scores reflect that you like what I am publishin...