by Duleigh
So incredibly perfect for what it is. A sonnet written in erotica. Bless you.
That was a lot of fun! But now I want to know if she took the job and they get married?
I think they will be back on for the next contest. The name of their upcoming adventure is
I Don't Do Nude Day
Actually, Honey pulled pranks on Arnold all the time. He just doesn't get them.
Tsk. Tsk. Tenses again….
I generally don't like romance stories with what my kids would call "OP characters", but the author managed to delightfully pull this off by making the story far more over the top than the characters themselves. Good show, chap. 5 stars.
A brilliant story. Comedy, fantasy, sex and love all in one package. All centered around a theme that worked. Loved the ending.
I have enjoyed most of your work, following first Josh and Veronica, then Don and Lahn, and Andi and Paul. What I find interesting is your mention of places close to my home area. A few stories ago you mentioned Coudersport, then in this you mention US Route 6, which passes through Coudersport, and the town of Golden which seems close to Galeton. I graduated from Galeton and have been many of the places near here you've mentioned. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more of your work!! JC
There was some promise, but the writing felt rushed. I'll read another of yours.