All Comments on 'I Enter a New World with My Son Ch. 03'

Is this the end? Really? I was hoping to read so much more of these two as they live together.

I like where this is going? The was very poignant. Straight and to the point. 5 stars

pls continue story but no threeson

just mother and son unless its another woman

You just gave up on part 3. What a shame. You had a good start, a good middle and you crapped the bed with part 3. Just gave up on the ending. Go back to your day job, quit writing!

I am sorry to say that chapter 3 was a disappointment. I know what it is like when you lose your train of thought when writting a dissertation. In this case, the author should have read/reread chapters 1 and 2 in an attempt to regain the emotional chemistry, sensitivity, and sexual relationship between lovers of equal standing. Honestly, I gave this chapter a 5 star rating soley out of respect for the quality of writting of chapters 1 & 2 and because I felt sorry for the author that he failed so badly in finishing chapter 3. It would have been betterif this chapter had never seen the light of day.

Thank you for 1&2. Sadly I wish I'd not read 3. I had hoped that the promotion led to a move abroad and a fresh start together. Your story and your ending. I will go and read some of your other work.

wtf was part 3 all about?

Sorry about the two stars but part three was crappy! Sorry.