All Comments on 'I finally fucked My married Ex'

Simply awful. Not sure what the story was about. More like an opening paragraph than a story. Sounded like a lesbian story when you started out with Vicki and Lucy. I'm not sure where or if it changed to a man, but you sure mixed things up. Try spending a little more time on the details of the story.

What an arsehole you are I hope the husband finds out about you and finds a nice swamp for your body.

Not too bad, experience with your writing will make it get better

Vicky is a girls name, so very confusing from the onset. This story should have been in non-consent/reluctance, at best. You badly need an editor.

What a scumbag

plese stop writing for god's sake

I enjoyed the story!

Vicky is a despicable character. Criminal drugging of a husband in order to seduce his wife. No good character, no morals, no ethics and no sense. Lucy's husband is going to figure out the timing related to Vicky's visits, his taking the gifted supplements, the onset of his dysfunction and the birth of "his" baby. Being India Lucy is likely to soon die in an unfortunate kitchen fire. Vicky will become an unwilling transgendered woman...at least she won't have to change her name. -- 1☆

I agree with Muskyboy, very confusing I first thought this was a woman wanting to fuck another woman, which in this case would be under lesbian, then it turns out your a boy using a girls name, and one that has no concept of writing, your writing in English so expect the grammar to fit, which yours doesn't. Either write in your own language and leave it there or get a proof reader and some help, well lots of help to write a better story in English.

Nasty Indian garbage.

Don't quit your day job...

Don't try writing full-time honestly you just quit writing in general

Also who the hell would name a male character vickey. With that being said that automatically screws up this story due to the fact he is gay so he wouldn't fuck a woman anyway, sorry but no straight man will be named vikey and that's american name not a Indian name,you just have no concept of how to write so why Is embarrass yourself by trying. If you want to write take writing classes after you go back to school to learn English if you write another story write it in your own language so most of us can't understand the crap you put on paper that makes you look stupid and Illiterate, hell even a 2nd grader can write better than you and that's sad

Well there is some crap stories on here but this sets the limit lower than a snakes belly A pathetic effort, not really worth one star