All Comments on 'I Fucked My... Aunt?'

That was truly, truly horrible!! A genuine one star effort! Naturally, I loved it. I need to see more of this type of writing. I mean, there was nothing, nothing at all worth saving. Even the title! How do you do it?!?!

At no point did it even do a flyby on erotic, all it tells me is you're 12-13 and a zit-magnet hiding in mommy's basement and masturbating constantly. Wash your hands and read something by the grown-up's on this site, if you're going to insist on posting here; at least try learn how to make a passably decent effort.

This was by far one of the top ten worst I have read on here in a very long time. Soon as I read the 40DD I knew the 9 or 10" cock would show up...sure enough.

GET A LIFE!!! How old are you 14? Seriously, like the others said..what a pile of crap! Please stop 'writing' and I use that word generously...This was a one star, and a zero star if they allowed it.

Sorry, wish I could of been there! It could of been the best fucking threesome in the whole fucking universe.

i fuck my aunt win i wise 16 she wise 30 never forget. big cock cord

I can tell this is your first effort. I'm not going to be like the others.

It was too short. I can understand the hot lust thing but you need to plot the story and think about your characters. Slow the action down. Building up to the sex. It seems they lusted for each other but you never said why. The nephew obviously had lust in his heart for her but how did it happen? Why did her husband leave? How did he get custody of his child?

If you decide on a part two and I hope you do, please take your time and further the plot. Fill in the blanks then write your story. Also find editors that can help you.

All of these excessively rude comments are pathetic. Why are you dicks acting like you're the Ernest Hemingway of erotic stories? Maybe the guy is a new writer, why don't you try being constructive with your lonely nerd anger?

Wow, those comments must have hit close to home for you to spew that much venom. Oddly, THEY comment on the story while YOU commented on them. Yeah, they're the ones being rude and full of lonely nerd anger.

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Ya want constructive comments? Start with yourself.

I stopped reading as soon as he got to the aunts house. This story was terrible. There was no build up. Do you understand what 40DD means? 40 is how many inches around and DD is the cup size. She's obese if it's 40. Why was the aunt so deranged? What mental illness did she suffer from? I could tell the nephew was just some hard up loser who never get's laid, but the woman's husband left her and he took the kid. Why? Maybe in the future you could create a plot that explains that because his mother travels for work and is absent for long periods of time, that the boy is detached and doesn't have any mother-son love relationship, if you did this ( and i am being kind. I don't think you have the talent to write without literally stating it.) this could be why he and his aunt have this close relationship and then if you knew how to write, you'd build up and eventually it could lead to a erotic sex story, but I think all you're capable of is writing filth stories with no plot. Read a book and learn how to write.

Is just giving it a 1 enough?

So, what's the most important thing about erotic fiction?

The fucking?

Nope.

The plain explicit language?

Nope.

It's the build up.

I know, it's good to write about fucking, and when the two people are full-on about it, wow.

But it's still the build up.

Show me 20 pages of buildup and half a paragraph of fucking, and that could be erotic.

But this had virtually no build-up.

Still, you have time to develop your style... so make the most of it.

I'm a fan of this type of story, but I have a question. Why do the vast majority of these stories have the Mother, Aunt, Sister or whoever have giant, enormous, 40DD. DDD or larger breasts? As long as they have good shapes even A's, B,s are good!

Like how aunt let her nephew fuck her.me i fucked my aunt my moms sister.i just grabbed her tube top pulled it down her tits were extra big and the largest nipples i seen and dark brown her mouth dropped open then pushed her on the floor took tube top and shorts off her she was naked no ubdies on.she had real nice thick bush too.she tried grab her clothes i through them other side of room.before she could get up gad my shorts off got on top of her rammed my cock in her hairy cunt and she screamed told take that fucking cock out and i said no kept fucking her until she said but dont cum in me i said thats even so i pouned her cunt so hard she felt getting ready told pull it out and i said no your going to give me a kid and i held her down let my cum go in her cunt abd she screamed no but it was to late her mouth dropped open then called you fucking bastard yeah told her your slut told her you been fucking your neighbor but he wore condoms so he wouldnt get you pregnant but your nephew did.said to her your marriage now done just looked me.told her i will be waiting for you to move in with me and she did when she saw my mom and sister mom looked at her said let me guess your prgenant too.aunt looked them and they said we carrying his kid too my aunt looked said welcome to the family and mom told me go get your aunt pregnant.than mom and sister walked up grabbed put her on her back i step up and pulled off her clothes then shoved cock up her cunt i raped her with help of my sister and momshe was screaming while the two sucked on her tits while her legs over my shoulders pounding her cunt real hard told mom put that fucking on her face rub that hairy cunt in her and once i cum in her told sister lick suck her cunt out then she said to my sister after she came suck fucking cunt of mine to slutnow have three kids but my sister gave me two more she wants me to give her three more and all three woman walk around naked and their big tits hang down now and i still fuck their asses and cunts

Valley

Did you knock her up too.my aunt Rachel said something to me when went on vacation together nudist resort where I got her knocked up first week that stayed now she been living with me when my mom found out that i had got her sister pregnant she came over told us she was moving in that she wanted me to knock her up which i did the 3 of us sleep in same bed we do threesome every night both of them kiss each other go down each other sucking cunts then I get behind them them fuck their ass cum in ass or pull out cum on their face I have got them pregnant 3 times each now we have 6 kids together very happy together use go on vacation together to nudist resort watch them get gangbanged bareback both got knocked up by group of black guys we stayed month there that all let fuck them just black both took 2 extra large cocks in their cunt then one in their ass one down their throats both were orgasming real hard until guys cum sametime in them they both tried catch their breath then another cock shoved down their throats once guys finished with them I called them both sluts they said you made this way told glad I did

You didn't know how old you aunt was or that her husband had left her .

Come on.

Things like this make a shite story.

"he wasn't directly related. It was my mothers' brothers' wife"

Down to the trash it goes.

Also, anyone who's ever had passionate sex knows that women don't scream THAT WAY when they love you and want to make you feel good.

2/10 would not read again.

Since I can remember I would go to my Aunt house when she wasn't home n look in ln her drawer n smell her pantries small her bra n Jack off..

I found out she was smoking meth too year's later she called me cuz she Wanted some meth.. I picked her up took out the pipe n she started smoking.. I wanted to grab her tits then n their... I didn't notice she was sucking the pipe n sucking my fingers by accidente too...cuz she didn't know how to smoke ..

. she would always text me at 10pm when she was in bed.

I asked her who was there with her... She said she was alone and ..so was I... So with my dick hard I asked her... SINCE YOUR ALONE AND AM ALONE DO YOU WANT ME TO GO OVER AND SLEEP WITH YOU... SO WE WON'T SLEEP ALONE?? BUT she said no .. n good niight.. she kept texting me. But never fucked her.

Poor attempt.

Great story fuck her Tyler

Did you knock up at least

Hope you got her knocked up I fucked my aunt knocked her up we live together she is expecting are third kid soon nice watching give birth told her want you have black kid put in next time

9inch cock and gene simmons like cock, oh please,absolute crap.

Aunt want nephew fuck her that good sign except took my aunt on vacationslept in same bed for ten vacation nude once we got home my uncle tokd her go move in with me she did also found out I knocked up my aunt wgen on vacation been together now 20 yrs have three boys she turned 65 now has four men fucking her all the time are boys

I have wanted to fuck my aunt Sandra since I was 14.She is my Mum's elder sister and was 36 years old.Sandra was and is still a gorgeous woman.While growing up,I satisfied myself by sniffing her dirty thongs, jacking my cock several times and cum for her. Though she was a gorgeous woman,she looked so serious. She was an insurance Manager.So I was so afraid of her personality that I NEVER showed her about my sexual feeling towards her.She had once married one of her colleagues but divorced after 3 years.its later on that I knew the reason thereof.So when I was 22 and her 44,she asked me to stay at her place for a week end to help her moving some furnitures..I was pleasantly shocked to see her wearing a tight short and a see through top.Icould see her boobs and tits that my cock began to harden.She noted my crotch and smiled Before dinner,we drank some wine and for the first time,I saw her in a joyful mood and I do not remember how I had the courage to tell her"Auntie,I can tell you now that since I was 14,you have been the sunshine of my life..You looked so serious that I could not compliment you and tell you that I greatly admired you and..and..The words remained blocked in my throat!She asked me to continue and no word came out of my throat!She smiled and I was shocked when she said"YOU WANTED TO FUCK ME"I then could only say"Yes auntie"She took off her top and I saw the two beautiful boobs looking at me.She then pulled down her tiny short.She was TOTALLY NUDE!I was like if I was hypnotised..Its her who undressed, me,kissed me,sweetly,then put herself on her knees and started to suck my hard cock that I filled her mouth with my thick cum very soon.She took me by my hands and brought me into her room.She sat on the border of her bed,opened her beautiful legs and ordered me"Suck my pussy, and clitoris and eat them!"I I immediately obeyed her.My cock had hardened and ask me to fuck her and to put my cock the further possible into her wet pussy.We fucked during hours on the Saturday night and practically the whole.Sunday .I then asked her why she was so serious during the previous years.She then told me that during a party given by her office,a colleague practically raped her and she became like a tortoise by entering under a carapace.She had to see her psychologist.Finally she started to survive physicology.. She knew that I had a crush on her and little by little, her libido began to work and she then wanted to start having sex with me because I had grown up into a sweet and gorgeous young man We regularly fuckbut under a total secrecy. My aunt is now like a volcano when I fuck her.Sometimes,I go out with some girl friends and each time,she wants me to describe my fucking with them,which sometimes make her uncontrolable of excitement when we fuck,

Good story buddy take know notice of the know alls on here bring on part two

Isucked m y aunts tits and fucked herei was 17 she is 60 n horney

I want to fuck my son's girlfriend. I'm 61 she's 18 I want her to suck my dick. I need to shove my dick so deep in her pussy it makes her cry. When everyone is gone ,I try and peep though cracks around the door to watch her shower. I jackoff while trying it peep in on her. I'm afraid she will catch me. What should I do what my rock hard dick?

I want to fuck my son's girlfriend. I'm 60 shes 18. I still believe I could beat that pussy up. I want to slide my dick deep down her throat. Flip her over and start fucking that pussy. She's always here at the house, I peak in on her when she shows. I can see Through a crack in the door. I'm afraid she is going to here me jacking off outside the door. I'm afraid to say anything, it would wreck the family. What do I do?