All Comments on 'I had No Idea'

by APRILBLOSSUMS

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JamesRTickitJamesRTickitover 6 years ago
Too much of a rush

Potential good story but you rushed through it.

Slow down take your time.

Funewriter1Funewriter1over 6 years ago

A great start to an excellent story. I hope you plan on writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Unrealistic

I agree too quick, need slower build up. Based on my experience.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Ok story but should be under lesbian instead of first time.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fantastique! Good pacing. I am sure the other commentators wanted the prose to be as drawn out as the experience most likely was, but then the story just gets too wordy. Love your writing style and all of your stories!

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