by jlltec
takes all kinds of people to make a world and only a few like you sickos to ruin it.
This is a good story.......not badly written and actually better written than most....enjoy your writing ........that's what it's all about....good luck.
Too bad Mr. Anonymous below has such a tightly closed mind... and ass, too, probably.
Good kinky story!
..good development of the Ladies sexuality and open-mindedness..Please write some stories about Kate&Pam's secret "vacation trip" where they actually are the beach bar's erotic masseuses at the Hilton's African nudist resort near Miami..they are popular and average over 18 half hour "sessions" per day each..and they are live on the internet 24/7..Pam loves the massively hung huge basketball players..so, so,BIG .what fun...
Too much time repeating chapter 1 -- very little happened in chapter 2. Suggest next chapter have less of the rehash of the first or second, and more that is "fresh" story. Your readers want some kink, not postponement.
Very difficult to understand who is talking. Bad writing and silly story.
I'd love to hear the rest of this story.
I 've been reading these stories and it feels like the writer knows my every emotion, it gives me chills.....in a good way. Please keep writing, don't ever stop.
Enjoying the story...looking forward to additional installments.
Great story. Can't wait to read what happens at the party. Wish he was me.
Can't wait to read the next chapters. Undressing and becoming totally naked in front of my wife's girlfriends is a dream of mine.
A very nice continuation of a story. If you read the first part…read this part. Unfortunately, after 12+ years without part 3, I don’t think we will ever know what happened at the party. Sad!