All Comments on 'I Kissed my Brother by Mistake Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
So many mistakes

This is a great concept and the story and characters are good but it is almost impossible to read and fully understand. There are so many mistakes with grammar, sentence structure, pronouns, etc. The phrasing is so awkward it makes me think that English is probably not your native language.

Plus the tension and awkwardness between Wyatt and Rhett is off-putting. They alternate between hot and cold with each other and it’s confusing. Rhett seems to be acting like a jealous little kid - although he has Astrid. He seems to be using her to make Wyatt uncomfortable. The whole thing just feels off and still confusing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Omg!!!

Omg this is getting really good can’t we get a couple pages in one chapter lol

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Love

I think Wyatt will have to be a caregiver when Rhett is drunk, but I also believe that Rhett is developing a love for Wyatt. Hope to see some splash of manly hair for Rhett's muscular chest. Let's get these brothers naked together so they can enjoy each other fully.

AlexpaulAlexpaulabout 3 years ago

Omg another cock tease session. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

LASFSEALASFSEAabout 3 years ago
brother love

I am looking forward to reading all about their experiences. Nothing wrong with brother love...There is a lot of potential with various story lines and I would not give up on Xavier just yet!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Hey! I’m reading your story on nifty also... and I know you have your classes, but you left us at a cliffhanger!! Please hurry 😪

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please Continue it's getting really interesting 😀

Heifel78Heifel78about 3 years ago

Really like the story.

My take is that Rhett is in love or lust with Wyatt. But he doesn't want to be.

I hope you will continue the story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great story. Can't wait for the next chapter!

ScrtCumSlut99ScrtCumSlut99almost 3 years ago
Next chapter?

Will we get another chapter ? I’m so ready to see where this goes!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Oh my God amazing please another chapter

carmelcookeecarmelcookeeover 2 years ago

I'm literally want this to continue...I was so into it then, BAM.... nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!

finish this pleeeeaasseeeeee....

wcshieldswcshieldsover 2 years ago

More please—so many possibilities

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

so hot.

Michrick1Michrick1over 2 years ago

Completely unfair of you to give us such a hot story and never give us an ending. Do us a favor and do not write here anymore inconsiderate one ☹️

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 2 years ago

Great story, hope you get a chance to finish it off .

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please continue! I love this story!

MijadedMijadedover 2 years ago

This story is really good , hope the author finishes it one day...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please complete the story for god's sake!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Those of you hating on the author for not completing his story on this FREE website need to chill TF out. Contributors to this site are not your personal servants. So be damn grownups and stop treating them like they are. I would love to know how this story ends, but I’d also like to find $1B in my mailbox tomorrow. I’ll just have to live with the disappointment of not getting either of these things. 🤨

Pitbull86Pitbull86about 2 years ago

The story continues on Nifty for anyone curious. You have to search for "Bennett Tan"

include the " in your search.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

SUCH a good story!! Would love to know how it ends someday, I am totally invested!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love, love this story, please write more stories!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please finish this story!!!

keyholeskeyholesabout 1 year ago

please update. it's so good, I would love to know how this ends!

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