by bennettwritesx
This is a great concept and the story and characters are good but it is almost impossible to read and fully understand. There are so many mistakes with grammar, sentence structure, pronouns, etc. The phrasing is so awkward it makes me think that English is probably not your native language.
Plus the tension and awkwardness between Wyatt and Rhett is off-putting. They alternate between hot and cold with each other and it’s confusing. Rhett seems to be acting like a jealous little kid - although he has Astrid. He seems to be using her to make Wyatt uncomfortable. The whole thing just feels off and still confusing.
Omg this is getting really good can’t we get a couple pages in one chapter lol
I think Wyatt will have to be a caregiver when Rhett is drunk, but I also believe that Rhett is developing a love for Wyatt. Hope to see some splash of manly hair for Rhett's muscular chest. Let's get these brothers naked together so they can enjoy each other fully.
I am looking forward to reading all about their experiences. Nothing wrong with brother love...There is a lot of potential with various story lines and I would not give up on Xavier just yet!
Hey! I’m reading your story on nifty also... and I know you have your classes, but you left us at a cliffhanger!! Please hurry 😪
Really like the story.
My take is that Rhett is in love or lust with Wyatt. But he doesn't want to be.
I hope you will continue the story soon.
Will we get another chapter ? I’m so ready to see where this goes!
I'm literally want this to continue...I was so into it then, BAM.... nothing!!!!!!!!!!!!
finish this pleeeeaasseeeeee....
Completely unfair of you to give us such a hot story and never give us an ending. Do us a favor and do not write here anymore inconsiderate one ☹️
Those of you hating on the author for not completing his story on this FREE website need to chill TF out. Contributors to this site are not your personal servants. So be damn grownups and stop treating them like they are. I would love to know how this story ends, but I’d also like to find $1B in my mailbox tomorrow. I’ll just have to live with the disappointment of not getting either of these things. 🤨
The story continues on Nifty for anyone curious. You have to search for "Bennett Tan"
include the " in your search.
SUCH a good story!! Would love to know how it ends someday, I am totally invested!