All Comments on 'I Knew What I was Doing Ch. 02'

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MigbirdMigbirdalmost 3 years ago

The sex scene between Jessica and Dani was hot/intense, but Dani’s reaction did not compute. True, maybe Jessica got carried away — after all intense sex — but used/abused (?). Storyline warranted follow up wherever that might lead in light of their experience with one another rather than all but new adventure.

Villan2242Villan2242almost 3 years agoAuthor

Migbird, I don't recall writing ‘abused’.......

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very erotic indeed. Thanks.

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