by Danni_Iridescent
This was a great story. I know some stories are just meant to end with the hint of what more could be, but I'd like to read about these two going on to have an actual relationship. Maybe I'm just a girl that way. Lol
Wonderful, imaginative and addictive story. Well told and SO hot. I'm so wet right now.
xoxo,
Di
WOW!!
That was one of the hottest stories I have read in a long time! I hope it continues .
I almost came reading this! I would love to find a woman like libby!!
Very well written story I love how she became contrite when she discovered that he didn’t know. Very different from the usual quasi-rape scenes that typically ensue
The hottest story ever!! I want to be Elliot in the worst (best) way!!
Well written and hot, only small issue is that on page 1 he’s a teacher wearing a polo because he came straight from work, then later when she’s prepping his backdoor, you say he showered right before the party.
A perfect balance between a build up and ultimate climax in every sense of the word. Please continue writing! This is great stuff.
I feel a sense of nationalistic pride when the word ‘arse’ appears in a really good story. 🇫🇴 I knew you were English (forgive me if you’re Welsh or Scottish 🇬🇧) as soon as I read that word.
I’ve actually ended up reading this story by accident. For the first time ever I looked at the monthly contest winners. I wanted to see what had won in Romance and then scanned through the others, looking to see the ratings, and was surprised to see such a wide range for the winners. I liked your title in its simplicity, and thought your name funny, so I decided to give it a go as I occasionally read the category and have written a couple of stories.
Down to the story itself. Along with everyone else, apart from those who for some reason gave you a four 🤔🙄, I thought it excellent. After reading it I checked out your bio and if what information you’ve given is correct, and this will probably sound ageist, for someone of your age to write a story of such quality and detail is quite outstanding.
To comment on two sentences in particular “when she pulled it out it was almost like pooping” and “If you push out, like you’re, you know, pooping, it’ll help, baby.” Very accurate even if, like me, you’ve never had the real thing up your arse. Even when you know there’s nothing there you still think something might come out. 😂
There’s the odd typo and, this is just my personal preference, I hate the use of brackets. To counter that I do like the way you highlighted specific words. You didn’t do it the clumsy way with using bold type.
So glad you had her become gentle when she realized he was a virgin. The story was very hot but the bondage and especially the gag were troubling to me. Too rapey, just as she said in the story. The sensitivity and communication was a lot sexier for me. She can bring on the femdom After they become a loving couple with complete trust. Id also love it if you had them talk about the femdom, have limits, safewords, etc. A lot of femdom on literotica is one sided, exploitative, and degrading not mutual or loving. Yes i think femdom can be loving. I think you could write it. Just my two cents. Nice story.
I loved this story! It's almost like the fantasy I've had since I was a teenager!
A nice story, enjoyed it more than I thought. The characters really made the story. I would love to be with a non-surgery trans woman, but with a smaller (4”) cock, not one with a cannon between her legs.
It’s hard to believe, but there aren’t many trans stories on this platform where a straight guy unknowingly goes home with a Futa - thinking he’s going do some fucking - and then gets skillfully turned into a submissive cum Slut for big cock, and as you can tell from these comments, there are plenty of guys who would love finding themselves in Elliot’s predicament - myself included!
I see that this transgender category is not your favorite story line Danni, but you sure know how make it seem believable! Don’t give up on it.
wow trans dom sub guy is hard to write without crossing into demeaning or abusive territory. but you made libby equal parts gentle and fierce. Are there any more chapters? Thanks for writing this.
Really like this! surely you’re going to continue this story! So many possibilities!
This is a very good story with a nice twist towards the end that made this feel very real. “I Like That it’s You” is a great quote and it would make for a great follow up story detailing the start of a new relationship. Yes, this story is good enough for another chapter. With that said, you should write more stories of this genre.