All Comments on 'I Love My Mother Ch. 01'

That's it? Not even an appetizer. 1 star!

please dont write any more

Good start

Here at the Lit it is not acceptable to write a couple of paragraphs and then wait for "REPS" from the members and then send in another short insalment of the story.

That is how things work on Exbii and forums like that but NOT here at the Lit!

So please either write at least a full instalment of a story, with a beginning and an end or please stay at the other forums.

There was no story here. There was no erotica here. Then we have illiterate zombies like Edwarus asking for more.

This isn't even worth a vote.

Very honest and sincere. Often seeing mom naked has a profound impact on young man. Many guys have similar feelings.

It's short but a good start. Would like to see the story continued at least to see where it goes. Thanks

There needs to be more

No erotica here

It was a good start, but what was the point starting a not finishing. Sorry, but I'm finished. I wont be pulled-in again by any of your stories, finished or not.

Wow much amazing, probably the shortest story I've read on this site ._.