All Comments on 'I Love My Work...'

You could extend your discriptions of her face/body and the action, but still itis really good.

First off, I am really liking this story so far. However, I would give a bit more description, extend the descriptions of her body, her features. Things of that nature.

great first story. so vbery erotic and very horny.

now you have started and you now a first time writer. on with that next awesome story ready then go baby go.

Verry nice story. I have nothing to add that others have not said. Your main character has been left with a problem. Do write some more to help him out.

Thank you.

great story

you have us all ready for a good shag