All Comments on 'I Love You Ch. 01: Of Two Beginnings'

You do realize this is rape in a way. Sorry, not sexy.

This is …sad. Its one thing to punish Greg; but Elizabeth has done nothing wrong. And yet now, she is unable to say no to sex with other men. Pregnancy, STD’s, UTI, cervical cancer, violent abuse, even drugs or alcoholism…and for what? For being married to Greg?

If this is Tim’s true character, then it’s no surprise his girlfriend cheated on him.

\/ You do realise that there's thousands of stories about hypnotised people getting fucked?

Rape is not entertaining.

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Why do people write these rape stories? Are you that sad of an individual? Not a warning of rape or even non-con. I pity you as a person.

not a fan. cuck story hidden in mind control

ch2 plz

Just another load of bollocks

Needs more

Great another got what he Deserved. It's too bad he didn't add into the instructions that he must Suck the other man's cock clean And eat his cream pie out of his Lizzy wife. Keep writing..