by Nicky1985
I love this story, it's my favorite of all time. The buildup was great how he got her smoking, but I would love more details of her life as a smoker now.
Like how much is she smoking now and how her addiction grows more and more. It would have also been great if he told her how much he loves her smoking and encouraged her to smoke more.
Just my thoughts, but I love the story and I think you're an amazing writer, I would just like more smoking.
I agree with Anonymous. This story is all a smoking fetish lover needs. Especially the forced change from the pure anti-smoking girl to the opposite!! Love it!!