All Comments on 'I Love You More!'

by JimmyJohn3

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

It could have been worse. It was more a narrative than a story, and far beyond reality. However, better than 95% of the other first story entries of late. Keep trying and don't rush things.

Boyd PercyBoyd Percy11 months ago

Good first story!

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HBIC77HBIC774 months ago

Really liked it. Sweet amd sexy. Please write more :)

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