All Comments on 'I Made My Sister Ch. 09-10'

Well the last chapters are published and genuine thanks to everyone who has read and commented.Even negative comments. This is my first real attempt and I apologise if I've introduced too much variety in one story line. I think I'll now stick to one or two themes and keep them in seperate stories. Thanks again everybody. Max121

The pregnancy of mom wasn't showcased enough. After all, that is the whole point of the story. More time should have been spent on how the two of them felt, how the new life was going to change their lives. I would think he would be very possessive of his mother, the mother of his child, and make her submissive to him only. No more lesbian sex with her sister, and she should worship him for impregnating her. Thanks .......Rich

I find the son-impregnating-mom concept hot, but I agree with previous commentors to this & previous chapters that you don't focus enough on the mom's pregnancy & that the side story of the son's gay sex with his cousin was too much. Also, during the 3rd or 4th installment, you switched from 1st-person point-of-view (the son's) to 3rd-person POV. I think you should have stayed in 1PPOV throughout, as the series' very title uses 1PPOV. May your writing improve with each story you write.

Good, but definitely some room for improvement, I can't say I understand how an 18 year old is so ignorant a character.

A great read that rekindled a fantasy I have had since a lad.

Damn I wish I had a hot sexy family as this one, to be able to explore all of the many forms of sexual expressions, from straight sex, gay, bdsm, cd, watersports, an group sex orgies, all the while in a safe an loving environment, also this explains how the mother was able to survive so long without going on dates an bringing said dates home, all she needed to do was go visit her sister, his Auntie dearest for sum hot loving sex, when mum got all hot 'n' bothered horny, now for me personally I would love to marry in to a similar family in a heart beat in the real world, 5 sexy family stars.

Damm, this has to be the sexiest incest and pregnant story I have ever read... I am so jealous of this boy and his mother... I wish my mother and sisters were this open for sex, invest and an incest baby each...

Keep up the good work... More stories like this, please!!!

Incest with family mother gets knocked up then gets dped.when on vacation knocked my aunt and mom up at nudist resort they even got gangbanged bareback too.once we got back told both them time for you two file for divorce your moving in with me.one day my cousin comes over to talk to her mom asked her who got you pregnant.aunt said your looking at him she looked at me said time for you to fuck me said ovulating my aunt said are you sure yes I am told me put it in.told my mom and aunt hold her down going ram and rape her cunt and ass they I fucked my cousin hard both holes once finished cousin said feels like you ripped me apart then week goes my aunt told me my daughter having your baby.also said moving in with us.told my aunt does she know that she has participate in getting gangbanged too.three of them had kids later I set up gangbang for the three sametime with large group of black guys it was bareback and to get them pregnant for them carry black in them.they each gave birth to three kids each.they stay naked big tits swinging and hairy cunts nice and thick letting my cum leak out of them to this day

Especially when the son and cousin got together, thats not for me. But other than that it was passable. ⭐️⭐️⭐️

I think one can go too far in a story. Bondage and Whipping is going too far.

Very erotic story.

However, this ‘loving mother’ says she has been celibate for 7 years but we later find she’s into ALL of the sexual ‘deviances’ known to man.

I fail to see how she could have maintained celibacy for that amount of time without being tempted, especially with her entire family’s male population being so keen on incest and her being so sexual. It wouldn’t have taken much for one or two of those to persuade her.

The original premise of the story was good but the idea of a mother corrupting her only child to all these practices in such a short space of time is ridiculous.

Well written though, just too much.

You were off to a great start......then the gay stuff and a mom who turned out to be a real whore.