All Comments on 'I Married a Nympho Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

So, basically he married her to cover up the fact he was actually gay. No wonder she needs to step out for a man to fuck her properly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very erotic and well described action!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well the husband at home should have at least film of activities.....they all had cell phones????well written and nice character development. I did need the boy on boy stuff but in our some generation of you can not read what are you going to do....having a strongly dominate female leader in sexual exploration is very interesting...much more than a nymph she has a sexual turned intelligence that is refreshing and devil may care lifestyle marriage ..this makes it work....thanks for your effort Walter

PennyAwfulPennyAwful10 months ago

I was intrigued that the story switched from first person to third. I've written a two part story in third person and found it a bit difficult. It's easier for me to tell my story rather than have it told by an observer. First person is more immediate and personal. It is possible that I'm just a bad writer. Even the gay bits were erotic. I was surprised by that because I've never found men, gay or straight erotic at all. I do find cum kissing and cream pie eating erotic, but there's naughty a female intermediator.

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I've written several published novels, but I enjoy getting "down and dirty" once in a while here, and going deep into the taboo areas that a lot of mainstream readers might not appreciate (or who secretly would, but would never admit to it in public!) Several of my stories hav...

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