All Comments on 'I Married My Maid's Daughter'

You make no sense. You start off with Z and Madga being married for six years. Then a few sentences later, you write that they have only been living together. I lost interest quickly because you flip flop so much.

not real incest here

It is basically unreadable. It'll take a bunch of work to get it to a decent level of readability.

The author: guys, I will try to improve... I confess I am not a writer and, possibly, the criticism is correct. That being said, I like to put in paper the different ideas. More precise suggestions are very welcome.

One very lucky family all 3 of them plus the little 1 that is fantastic Is one great fantastic story