by SSSultan
The ability to control someone to doing anything you want is so incredibly sexy. I love the descriptions of the events, the dialogue. Having her reveal what she hated the most and then doing it to her is absolutely evil - I love it! (Though part of me wishes it wasn't something as mundane as cocksucking.) I can't wait to read the next part!
Well written dialogue - both internal and external - and your descriptions are clear, concise, and visually arousing. Enough detail to allow for a legitimate suspension of disbelief without getting bogged down in long-winded/intricate rationalizations for his abilities. Good show, chap - well done. Quite looking forward to further installments.
~ennui