All Comments on 'I Once Had a Girl or Should I Say... She Once Had Me'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

mmmmmmm loved the story

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maria17maria17about 2 months ago

What a beautiful story. I really enjoy age difference stories. And this one was one of the best.!

live4today50live4today50about 2 months ago

What a fabulous, heartwarming and sexy story. I'm sure that many (like me) log on for the "arousal factor". And you totally achieved that. But in addition your story is uplifting. It has a genuine feel good factor to it. You have made my day! It is also very well written and I love the way you connected the characters/events. Thank you SO much

Nicole2023Nicole2023about 2 months ago

I normally don’t read stories less than 10k as I feel the shorter stories always leave me wanting more. I’m glad I gave this one a chance. I enjoyed it.

ChumulyaChumulyaabout 2 months ago

A really great story.

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWritesabout 2 months ago

Great story. Sexy and romantic all at once. I hope you can find a way to continue this story.

BroadusBroadusabout 2 months ago

A beautiful -and quite different- love story, nicely told. Please keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymous25 days ago

I really enjoy reading your stories, and I love the passion between your characters! Keep writing!!

Jackie.HikaruJackie.Hikaru15 days ago

Loved how uninhibitedly naughty the sex became at the end and the complicated layers to the characters. Well done! Officially riled up here.

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Just starting out. I hope you liked chapter 1. Chapter 2 just got published. It’s a loving but painful story. I’m a “happily ever after” kind of writer, so don’t worry. Things always seem to have a way of working out. Chapter 3 is started. I’m about 5 pages in. It will be a ...