All Comments on 'I Once Had a Girl or Should I Say... She Once Had Me'

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Jackie.HikaruJackie.Hikaru26 days ago

Loved how uninhibitedly naughty the sex became at the end and the complicated layers to the characters. Well done! Officially riled up here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

I really enjoy reading your stories, and I love the passion between your characters! Keep writing!!

BroadusBroadus2 months ago

A beautiful -and quite different- love story, nicely told. Please keep writing.

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites2 months ago

Great story. Sexy and romantic all at once. I hope you can find a way to continue this story.

ChumulyaChumulya2 months ago

A really great story.

Nicole2023Nicole20232 months ago

I normally don’t read stories less than 10k as I feel the shorter stories always leave me wanting more. I’m glad I gave this one a chance. I enjoyed it.

live4today50live4today502 months ago

What a fabulous, heartwarming and sexy story. I'm sure that many (like me) log on for the "arousal factor". And you totally achieved that. But in addition your story is uplifting. It has a genuine feel good factor to it. You have made my day! It is also very well written and I love the way you connected the characters/events. Thank you SO much

maria17maria172 months ago

What a beautiful story. I really enjoy age difference stories. And this one was one of the best.!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

mmmmmmm loved the story

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Just starting out. I hope you liked chapter 1. Chapter 2 just got published. It’s a loving but painful story. I’m a “happily ever after” kind of writer, so don’t worry. Things always seem to have a way of working out. Chapter 3 is started. I’m about 5 pages in. It will be a ...