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by onlymark

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
You could use an editor

Too many typos. It interfered with the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Meh

Blase' plot, and horrible mechanics. Please learn to use quotation marks when someone is speaking. That alone would have helped tremendously.

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