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by JustEvie
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bucksumgalabout 4 years agoInteresting
It's an interesting way to write this story. You use some picturesque phrases, like when you are talking about the seasonal striptease.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI see what YOU did there
This reminds me of You. I enjoyed it from his perspective. Great writing... very colorful. I like the saving grace of it all being in his head too. I wonder how many times he has done that? I need more.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoErotic, sensual and creative
Very nicely written. Got wrapped up in that daydream as well. Do keep going with writing. 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
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