by Farmers_Son
Wonderful work. We'll told and as long as it was in length, it was too short. I was in hopes of a few more chapters.
Thanks
Overall a good series, but I was very disappointed in the 2nd chapter. The ending was especially off kilter.
This remains one of my favorite stories here. It's not the marital tension that attracts me, but the rest of the story as the MC works to find himself. It's very good and 5***** all the way!
The wife Megan was just a delusional, selfish slut who had absolutely no regard for her marriage, her husband's feelings nor thought to the consequences of her breaking her marriage vows or the betrayal committed against her husband.
Seriously entertaining story of a man's growth. The ending seemed a bit forced but at least Missouri and Megan did not get back together. She did not deserve him
I gave you a 5 since it was a captivating story. I think you should have ended it before you got into the movie part. You are a talented writer whose works keep me involved and happy.
Great story series! Loved reading it! My little take from it was that Megan was sold a bill of goods with that alternative lifestyle from the Brooks. Too bad… influence from others without communicating with your spouse. Thank-you for this great story
Or third reading I think it should have had a 3 or 4 star review you have always been a good writer but I like a really happy ending.
This was a great story and gets five stars, for sure. It was a delightful read and illustrated clearly how the polyamorous life was not sustainable for most people. I really enjoyed tha story.
I liked the story. I've always been a push over for westerns and cowboys! Great job!!