All Comments on 'I Told My Wife My Biggest Secret Ch. 04'

by TheRiseFromAshes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
True to life

Your storytelling leaves something to be desired, but it definitely read like an accurate retelling of real events... so points for authenticity

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Your now a CUCKOLD

Get down there and clean her up. Next time clean him up too. YUM YUM YUM

TheRiseFromAshesTheRiseFromAshesover 4 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Though I really appreciate your compliment, I'd really like to improve on the storytelling. I'll try to do that in the next chapter. But if you have suggestions, please feel free to add them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
So far so good

Interesting to see how the dynamic between the 3 evolves. It seems like you're setting up for her to have multiple partners, though personally I'd like kev to remain the only partner for now

executivelustexecutivelustover 4 years ago

Love this story. I think you captured how it feels going into a well fucked and creamed pussy. I think you need to talk more about what you are feeling as you watch. But a good story and seems very real.

gpetagpetaover 2 years ago

and now the sick hubby had his sloopy seconds after watching his slut getting fucked by his friend

Buster2UBuster2Uover 1 year ago

Great writing. 5 stars! I just know kev is going to start bringing his black buddies over to fuck while hubby is at work. I am fearful she is going to start liking kev too much and start cheating on hubby.

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