All Comments on 'I Took His Wife ... Ch. 01'

Very hot and sexy! Five stars and a favorite point!

Fantastic! One of the very best love scenes ever, if I may call it love instead of raw sex. Can't wait for Ch 2.

I'm not one for multi-part stories. That said, bring on the next part.

I can see why the story might offend some, and while I can't personally say if a woman would feel this "desperate" from no sex...you convince us by how you structure things and their interactions. You made Jennifer flirting with him quite real, although I was a bit surprised how quickly it escalated. Except for a minor point here and there, I really loved how he pleasured her and how she reacted to him--and it felt like it could have happened. The only thing out of place was her forgetting she didn't have birth-control pills.

Very primal, sexy and hot. 5

Great start! Looking forward to seeing what direction and how far you take it.

And if you don't do anything to keep it, or more likely assume that it's yours no matter what you do or don't do, then you lose BIG time.

Five star opening act. Anxious for more.

He needs to make her his. Hell with her husband. Hopefully she can show him the baby bump he gave her.

Very nice start but wish you ha submitted the entire story...Honestly, I would have like this story much better if she was a widow or not married though.

5 Stars...she is His!

Exceptionally well thought-out, written, and presented. Keep the good work!

A very nice story, so far. Need to read another chapter. AAAA+++++

The pull out panic kind of ruined the mood a bit. Let's hope they get together. She deserves better than an asshat husband that chases young tail.

THAT WAS HOT! 5 stars easy