All Comments on 'I Want You to Look'

"I don't think you can say that word anymore." I loved that. What perfect brother-sister dialogue. I loved the story. Well done.

Im pretty sure the doujin you're talking about is Mukashi wa Kawaikatta | She Was Cute Before by Nakani. 265949 on nhentai.

Great story btw!

Great story, nicely told and at a sensible pace. Some spelling mistakes to tidy up - but we all have that problem!

Although I've never known a female to be into fluids as much as Klara I suppose in throes of passion it could be erotic I guess.

I gave this 4 out of 5 stars 'cuz it took awhile to get interesting with her being bitchy at the start.

" I know it may sound like complete overblown hyperbole, but it was definitely, and without exaggeration,......"

Totally overblown and exaggerated story.

Fantastic. I was drawn to the dialogue and his thoughts as they were processing. You painted amazing pictures and I felt I was there lurking like a silent observer they couldn't see. Great story. Wow!

i wonder why is it always the " younger" sister . 90% of bro-sister stories, the sis is younger... Would be a great change and fresh air... the sister being the older one!

Tolerable, but there's potential.

Very good, hot actually. Well written for the most. If you care to edit, I suggest replacing 'peak' with 'peek'; 'devile' with 'defile' and 'waste' with 'waist.' The aunt segment is confusing, a clarification would be welcome. All in all, well done. Thank you.

good story, typo is excepted used instead of accepted

How does she still have a hymen after shoving 4 fingers in her twat earlier in the story?

OK, but what was all the innuendo regarding fertility and babies? UK?