by mistermyst13
Read the whole story. Your sex scenes and plot are both brilliant!
Such a great adventure, this story has it all and just comes alive. Can't wait till the next chapter. Hopefully we the readers won't have to wait too much longer. Well done, 5 stars
You received**5** stars for this chapter...
BUT, your editors should be fired, they are not doing you any good with the spelling and grammar mistakes. Your story is TOO GOOD to let these things detract from them!