All Comments on 'I was a Sasquatch Pt. 02'

I read re-read and edited this latest chapter at least 5 times before publishing it. Even previewed it twice. After reading it once again now that it is published I spotted several serious, well serious to me at least mistakes in explaining a few of the goings on. Too many inverted words a few extra but, or and conjunctions, plus I left out a complete sentence describing what the waitress experienced while John was hacking the young man's bank account.

To clarify her pink stick went nuclear.

Dyslexia never goes away. I've known I've had it for over 60 years

But I try to do better