All Comments on 'I was Fucked by my Friend's Bf'

A shakey start. You need an editor for your non native English. Many errors easily corrected.

Keep trying.

Difficult reading as it is non-emotional and mostly without feelings. Either he had no clue on how to please s woman or she just didn’t get into the sex.

Thank you for the feedback. As its my first story I didn’t had any prior experience in writing. Will surely add the emotion and feeling elements to make it a good read.

Not bad for a first story! I'd suggest going into a little more detail, the way alot of it is wrote is like narrating the basics and the lack of detail made things confusing. There was also alot of ehh.. Run along sentences I believe it's called? Like many times it kept saying and in a sentence and like certain details were it's own sentence instead of a bunch of details in 1. The multiple calls made it seem very unrealistic. Also didn't show why it was in mature, I figured friends bf was in early 20s too so wondered if I got pulled into a different category again 😅

BUT it was still a great story, I hope to see more in the future!