All Comments on 'I Won't Desert You Ch. 01'

A very intriguing premise for a story-can't wait for more!

Very nice start. Please write fast.

Good start, good set-up. I look forward to reading more of this.

This sounds like an interesting plot. I can see all sorts of places this might go.

I can't wait for more!! This is a great start with some really interesting characters.

Very interesting. Has a lot of potential. Looking forward to more. :)

Excellent. I want to know more about Jayden, Cadeon and Jordan.

good start, continue that story and bring on the action, it looks like it could be sexy and exciting!

i really loved it cant wait to read more

This is a great way for an emotionally hard story to begin. I'm hooked and waiting for many more chapters.

I'm an instant fan of arisamorak. I have already read some other stories by this writer. I admire a writer who can immediately capture and hold on to a reader's interest. The plots are great and the characters very believable and likeable.

This is really great... Can't wait to read more PLEASE update soon...

Please write more - please!! I want to see what happens next!