by arisamorak
This is really great... Can't wait to read more PLEASE update soon...
This is a great way for an emotionally hard story to begin. I'm hooked and waiting for many more chapters.
I'm an instant fan of arisamorak. I have already read some other stories by this writer. I admire a writer who can immediately capture and hold on to a reader's interest. The plots are great and the characters very believable and likeable.
good start, continue that story and bring on the action, it looks like it could be sexy and exciting!
I can't wait for more!! This is a great start with some really interesting characters.
This sounds like an interesting plot. I can see all sorts of places this might go.