All Comments on 'IaW Ch. 07: A Perfect Day for Motorboating'

A vignette, a slice of LA life, a post-party, coming down, mis-remembrance? All three? I better go back and review the previous chapters. The writing is fresh but damned if I know what just happened. But I liked it nonetheless. A fiver.

@mattenw, I sggest you speak to the mods, rather than bitching here, because the mods long ago made it clear that girlfriends and fiancees were fair game in LW.

but didnt advance the story much. Unless you think Rick is getting into polyamory. Still disgusted the last chapter went full on cuckold, oh well.

Hey mattenw, thanks for weighing in here! Love your constructive critique, as well as your anonymous contributions; it's great to get feedback from the incel crowd. Which reminds me: I'm sure your insights would make for a thoughtful, exciting story. Don't limit yourself to guilty emissions in the comments section, write a story and gift us a guide on how it's done.