All Comments on 'Identical Twins, Two Pairs Ch. 01'

by leBonhomme

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
WHAT???!!! NO SNORTING???!!!

Apart from the fun of looking out for the snorting, still tragically dull; I forgot the story even as I read it, so once again, shoots for the gold, hits own foot; no Hall of Fame for you with this one, either.........

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Have to agree with previous commentator

Immensely dull, all the zing and eroticism of a washing machine user manual, not even any snorts, grunts, or "hmmm...hmmm's" to break up the monotony, just yards and yards of lumbering dialog and so-so plotting. Nah.

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