by Xie_Lei
very touching and overall GREAT story. i look forward to reading more of your stories, so please don't stop writing!
i've read all of your submissions and they are great...would love to read more from u and perhaps get an update on kie, jake, chet and asato in future stories
Please keep writing, your style and stories are really well done!! Keep it up!!
All of your characters are wonderful and you have a wonderful writing style. Extremely good job. Can't wait for more.^_^
I don't know how many times I cried through out the whole story! so touching! T_T
another fabulous story that you have produced ! Excuse the poor grammar.
Okay I go through all of your stories. It was a super work of art. The characters were charismatic and wholly down to earth. I grew to like all the characters in both of the stories you did. I will hazard to guess that if you are able to write more and post some more you very well could turn all of this into a novel or novella for publication. Keep writing you got a great fan here.