by AWhoopsieDaisy
Comments, analysis, critique and even key smashes are all welcome. I was a little hesitant to put this of all things on Literotica, so definitely let me know what you think of it. Predictions are great and I love to hear them. I'm having a lot of fun writing about these bisexual disasters.
I loved it. I love the way you encorperated Eddie's inner dialogue, and Peter's spider sense. I've dated 'middle of the road' guys like Eddie, so the interactions felt authentic to me.
@MsNatalie99 It's awesome to hear I got that much right. As a lesbian I was worried about accidentally sounding like fujoshi (I think that's the word). I really wanted to dig into the psyche of these two and explore Eddie's complicated relationship with Venom and Peter. I'm glad these two read as believable and in character.