- Incest/Taboo
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Click here"Sure thing, Mom. Back in a mo," he said and disappeared into his bedroom. I went into my own, and on into my bathroom, brushing my teeth and carefully washing my pussy. I removed and cleaned my diaphragm and carefully reinserted it. Okay, I was ready, and went back into my bedroom. Rob was already in bed, waiting for me, but he was sound asleep! I laughed softly, wry, and carefully, quietly, slipped into bed beside him. I stretched across and gave him a light kiss, then settled myself for sleep. Okay, Robert Patterson Kincaid. Your first task upon waking will be to make love to your mother, and oh boy! Is she looking forward to it!
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoHello.
I liked this story overall, and it was a good concept.
I don't typically like multiple partners action, but this one seemed to work.
That said, and as others have pointed out, the dialogue lacked spontaneity. A lot. It was definetly too scripted. You did however, maintain respect to the integrity of all players, and for that I thank you.
The action at the beach was exciting, and very believable, as was the sex afterwards.
Sincerely,
B4PW.
wwaldrip7 months agoGreat story really enjoyed the sensuality and the realistic imagery of how it all came together was beautifully written and believable. Keep up the great writing
Anonymousabout 1 year agoFunny story but really missing sensuality and realistic. This is hard to project into the story.
alan_deeabout 1 year agoVery robotic. Every action seemed to be verbally expressed just before it happened like everything was always planned in advance. "You are going to eat me, then you are going to fuck me in the missionary position", "we are going to sit in this order on the couch.............." Absolutely no spontaneity with anything.
rbloch66over 1 year agoGood concept, horrible execution. The dialogues did not seem natural and therefore didn’t flow well at all.
