All Comments on 'If I Knew Then... Ch. 09'

Many thanks to those who take the time to read this, and to vote, but could I ask for a little more - a word or two of feedback? Good things, bad things, what worked, what didn't, any comments welcome.

These stories are just about perfect.

Very good job of pacing -- the incremental building of action works really well here. Good characterization. I've read many stories where the protagonist gets a chance for a redo, but I've not read such a story where the tale of the first reality is available as a stand-alone work. Reading "If I Knew Then..." along with "Bad Penny" has been very illuminating and engaging.

Thanks and keep writing!