All Comments on 'If The Opportunity Arises'

trying to do a flow-of-conciousness? hard to do. this came out turgid and lost.

One of those stories that I just read every other paragraph without missing anything. No real feeling

Has been mentioned on the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout.

Falling.

i thought it was well written. i would like to see some more like this from you. i like having the back story in it and such:) thank you~!

them up, give them an education, let them have money or refinement. It all comes down to if she is a slut or a whore that is what she is nothing more nothing less, just trash. Would be nice if custody wound up with her exhusband, sluts and whores are poor role models for children.

This is one of the best novels I've read here. Very profound and enthralling, focussing on the thoughts and psychology of the protagonists. A really mindblowing story.

Many thanks

Intended as a Edyth Troubled Wench Ascension Symphony, drifting or driveling in a lousy wet fart in the halls of suburbia common latrine.

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