All Comments on 'If There's One Thing I Know'

Terrific first offering. Hope to see more from this author.

Really unlikable people all around.

I couldn't get very far into the story.

It seems to start in the middle. We don't know who the people are. Where are they going? Who are the people that they are talking about? One seems to be a teacher. What is the class? Is this High School or College? Who is Greg?

Establish your characters. Make them someone your audience will like, not just a physical description.

I love a good non-con story, but to be honest, I had a tough time discerning who was who, and who was doing what with whom. It seemed the story was all over the place, and I had a hard time keeping up. Dialogue cues help. (I'm trying to give some helpful advice and tips that I've learned along my journey.) Maybe if I go back for a second read? But it's a great first try! Trust me, the first one is the most difficult one! It gets easier.