All Comments on 'If You Love Me (Let Me Go)'

by CynthiaTheMoonGoddess

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depressedperson101depressedperson101over 1 year ago

Nice P!ATD ref on the title.

MadzillahMadzillahabout 11 years ago
Yes, more please! Great descriptive writing!

Fantastic job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
wow

love it give us more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
great

I can't wait for chapter 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wah

You're off to a great start! :) Please continue the story! Don't leave us hanging! I've been checking everyday hoping for ch 2 of this story. :)

Fluffy07Fluffy07over 11 years ago
Awesome Start :D

five stars

CynthiaTheMoonGoddessCynthiaTheMoonGoddessover 11 years agoAuthor
Thank You All So Much

I didn't have use to my laptop this week until now so I will be starting on chapter 2 this week and have it posted by Friday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Very good. Nice take on an old tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Looking forward to more. Really enjoyed!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

This is incredible please please please continue further with the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

I like the set-up. It could use more emotion and greater details, but that's nitpicking. I already love this story and you do tell it very well. I hope you have longer and many more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

this is a fabulous intro, and a wonderful take on the tale. Looking forward to the (hopefully somewhat more explisit) later chapters! Please keep up the great work!

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