All Comments on 'Ill Met By Moonlight'

It was going great until the end. I was even hoping to have them buddy up to find the group and get to the video before they could upload it. But you just STOPPED the story. I had to give it only 2 stars for that. Please keep writing, get an editor, and remember to finish the stories plausibly.

The section at the end wasn't actually the end of this story, but a teaser of what was to come in a story that has yet to be told. If you will, think of it as a Marvel post credit scene in a movie.