All Comments on '"I'll Use Your Holes," The Ad Said'

What a nice slow build to a furious fucking. I’d love to see her the next day, rocking her work project, sore and bruised, one eye on the burner phone.

Thank you for your kind comment, firmbutgentle! I know I've said this already, but it's really an honor to be edited by someone I consider one of the top writers on Literotica. Thanks for all of your insightful suggestions and for all the tedious work you put into the minor edits to make this a better story.

please follow up. She still has a hole that needs more wrecking

Delightful. Nice balance of pushing and pulling, if that makes sense.

I loved this story. So well written and especially the verbal sparring. I think that the dialogue could be developed even further but it still rated five stars from me. I particularly loved the female perspective. I have tried to do this with my Guilt series here on Lit but having read your work I think I have a long way to go!

Thank you to jrgg43 and dear Voboy for the kind comments!

Summore, I agree with you. I do think dialogue has been a blind spot for me in my writing and I had not really noticed before you told me, so thank you for that. I am going to start paying closer attention to dialogue in the stories I read, see if I can come up with a story where the dialogue is truly a central part of the filthy build-up :) I am looking forward to reading your own take of the female perspective! Thank you for commenting.