by CaptainKirk
Great Job Captain! I really wanna watch this episode! Kudos to you for writing it so well that I almost could in my mind's eye. You've made such an excellent start. Can't wait to see what you write next.
You are a fantastic writer. Yes I have been and still am a Star Trek fan and SCI-FI reader. I think you portrayed the characters very well, extended the story perfectly. The original episode and how they modified it are still a couple of my favorites.
Thank you again for sharing your skill and talent with us.
Just as good or better than any short stories I've read in the published Trek collections. You write it, I'll read it.