Note: You can change font size, font face, and turn on dark mode by clicking the "A" icon tab in the Story Info Box.
You can temporarily switch back to a Classic Literotica® experience during our ongoing public Beta testing. Please consider leaving feedback on issues you experience or suggest improvements.
Click here"So if I haven't lost count, each of us with be naked in at least one of the photographs?"
"I'm getting excited just thinking about it," she gushed.
Now all I had to do was to convince nine to agree to participate. I didn't think I would have any problem with anus. She was becoming so addicted to baring herself. I really didn't think she would have any problem in baring her innermost self.
TO BE CONTINUED
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 3 years agoI had been much enjoying this story, and initially I was very disappointed at not seeing it updated in several months. Now I realize that perhaps it was after all best for the author to walk away from it. Recent episodes had simply pulled in too much. The narrative lost its emotional center. Perhaps CorbinC could refocus the story, tighten up the plot and get it back on track, but that would be a huge effort. Perhaps best to "chalk it up to experience", as the saying goes.
Anonymousover 3 years agoI think there's something about writing what your fans like and what you like that can really affect your motivation. You can really only write what you know but, at the end of the day, what you like. If you don't like the direction and your fans want it to go another way, then it becomes a tug of war between writing well vs. writing for the sake of writing. I'm only a few chapters and loving it so far but, at least for me, I'd rather see a story completed that goes in the direction the author likes to go than a half-completed story where the author loses their motivation.
That said, looking forward to more!
LupusDeiover 3 years agoGreat, this is becoming delightfully weird.
And when Monica uttered "anus" to Cyril, I had to shove the phone under the pillow. Then chuckle over myself about such a "girly" reaction, lol.
CorbinCover 3 years agoAuthorI had a big misstep back in Chap 4 and then a serious case of writer's block between Chap, 11 and Chap 12 where I had serious misgivings about transforming Monica and Joyce's relationship. I had a nagging feeling it was a mistake to go off in that direction, but apparently my "fans" liked the change. I'm just bubbling over with ideas now and I can't get them down on paper fast enough. Can Monica overcome her natural sub tendencies, can nine suppress her natural Dom tendencies, how will Monica turn out as the trainer of the new class of mailgirls, will Monica "monetize" her body, is Terri the rising star in this little group? And Olivia, poor little chubby Olivia enjoying her everything bagels, can she survive at Seahawk Industries?
