All Comments on 'I'm in Love with Gentry Ch. 07-12'

Part 2 was well worth waiting for. Looking forward to Part 3.

Thank you! Great story, looking forward to reading more...

It's getting to be really good. I can only say that it would be moderately better if there was more description, not only in physical appearance but in the thoughts that are going through Gen's mind.

P.S.

On a personal note I would like to see some public displays of affection.

i couldn't even finish the first page of "I'M IN LOVE WITH GENTRY CH.07-12"it was to strange and stupid i lost intrest when gen came into al's room wearing a sexy nighty then says we can't go any farther than we did before i mean what the hell if she doesn't want to go any farther then why is she wearing a sexy nighty get real any normal guy in that situation would look at her and tell her if you aren't willing to do any more than we already have then why the sexy nighty you are nothing but a fucking tease so just go back to your own room and we will tell mom we need to work on plan B i will suggest one of us sleep in a tent in the back yard and by the way we are through i never want to see you naked again no one likes being teased gen and you have been teasing all summer today it stops now leave this would have been a more realistic endding yours should be in the fantasy area

I am sorry but if you have had a relationship with your sister (maybe you haven't) then depending on the person the scene set here is entirely plausible. The story of Gen and Al, while not exactly like my own is very similar. Not all sisters and brothers actually consumate with vaginal or anal sex, similar to my own relationship with my sister that lasted a full 8 years only interrupted by some periods of distance. For both there was a strong desire for mutual satisfaction and in my case I was much like Al. At any stage I would have done anything to really fuck her but had to be content without fucking. It worked well for us and was extremely hot, nobody ever knew about it.

But, I sure wish you would. I thought it was a fine tale so far, but I think it should be developed into a real sibling love story like Jessy19's "MY BROTHER, MY LOVER". In any event, thank you for having written your tale. I thought it was really good.

First, let me thank you for your writings. "I'm in Love with Gentry" (all 12 chapters) was a great story, but nothing was consumated. So are you going to finish this storyline; you know, bring it to fruition?

and I would like to give it 5 stars, but can't. Al has to be the most experienced virgin in the cosmos.

Enough said...

love these two exploring each other and how their romance progresses thanks

but i'm sad there's only one chapter left. this is a really well-told story. great sex scenes, nice romance between brother and sister.

Can’t wait for the next chapter.