All Comments on 'I'm Not Asking, I'm Telling Pt. 02'

A really well put together story. I hope that there's more to this one! Thank you!

EXCELLENT

I have found both of these stories to be extremely interesting with a great scenario, good characterisation and some very descriptive passages.

I hope that there are further chapters to come in the future, thank you for publishing this excellent work.

As well written as the first chapter, but I enjoyed the military and foreign land aspects better.

Thank you!

Bob

I usually do not care for BDSM stories, but I tried this one and I have to say, "Well done!"

On a repeat reading this story is far better than I expected, the initial Afghanistan situation was a little difficult as I am aware of the restrictions that were placed on the British Armed Forces who were stationed in Helmund province, no socialising outside of the base and no fraternising with the locally employed staff