All Comments on 'I'm Only Sleeping'

Do believe that the wife could use a mental evaluation.

Now that was truly a loving wife!

The variations in plots by this author are unbelievable. He is the tops, not my favourite story,but I have it 5* because the author deserves it.

lol

LOL!

Wonderfully silly story. BardnotBard

Very funny.

I could only stomach a few short paragraphs. In a real situation, virtually any normal man would want to 'BITCH SLAP" the punk boy about 50 times and then beat the hell out of him. leaving him in the gutter with the rest of the trash.

This was unexpectedly excellent. I forgot how pleasant HDK's writing was, after his recent RAACy experimentation made me stop enjoying his work. 5 stars for quality and enjoyment.

Cute little story.

Damn, HDK, you do have a vivid imagination. And a little warped, too. Keep‘em coming, that’s just the way we like them.

5🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Just smile

Smile.

Very funny and well written. An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s

Oh man! Hilarious!

Good story. Dramamine makes me sleepy too.

;-)

5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

worth 10 just for the ending

Hilarious!

Love this story, very silly….

God this is dumb.

A really fun story. Short, but still 5 stars.

Bill S.

Quite funny situation, and narration was entertaining. Creative whodunit kind of plot. Not too protracted.

The only point where I stumbled was when the wife became insistent to the point of making a threat to cut him off. I would expect him to jump to the conclusion that she's trying to even the score and ask, "Who are you having an affair with?" Still, it remains a fun story.

Communication! Nice and cute story about love deep enough to share loved ones. Sadly uncle Buck is steaming towards the great dirt nap, soon to be a winner of the lawn limbo.

Lol. Good one

Very nice, again. I will say that this is one HDK story that really needs nothing more said. It’s all here and done.

What a hoot!

Now this is a fun way to make a ridiculous story sensible.

5 stars!

Bill S.

I wish I could have dated my ex's younger Sister ..She was built like a Brickhouse .Sadly she had the same morals as my ex did

That’s all we men are, pawns in their game. Enjoy the ride while it lasts, guys!

5 stars

...as good as a fresh story from HDK: a forgotten oldie. Thanks for the chuckle, author.

Keep 'em comin'.

An HDK story is always fun to read. This is a really good one.

Funny and brilliantly written

Absolutely funny! What 26thNC said, me too.

Funny story. 5 stars

The phone call should have been about 30 mins later.

Nonsense.

Funny

Fun with a great ending.

What better could it be?

Bill

Hilarious. Good job.

I never laughed that hard...great story

Cute story - loved it. 5*

Lucky...

What a lucky bastard!

Again, for a very funny little story.

Especially the end, where brenda grabs her hair. Haha

The person who conceived this story has a warped mind and a twisted sense of humor. And, my God, I do love it. Thanks much, HDK.

Perfect. *****

As always I had a good laugh.

:) 5 stars! Thank you!

I liked it. Good story. 5*

Brenda is one in a million. Good story.

Stupid but funny

JJ

He's already eaten her sister's pussy. Her sister has sucked his cock.... and they're FAMILY, for Christ's sake. She needs to stop being greedy and SHARE.

At least, now he knows that her sister WANTS his cock. Maybe she has a loose handle on one of her dresser drawers that she needs him to 'tighten'.

⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ ⭐ + 🌠

One of the really nice stories. A completely different theme with lots of humour. One rarely comes across something as good as this, with characters as good as Brenda,her sister, the families and of course, Jeff. 5*s.

When I was Married to My First Wife .. She had a Great Sister That everyone wanted to play with .. The wife I have now would kill Me .. She gets jealous easily but then again so do I .. Why go out and Cheat with a fast food Hamburger .. When You Have Prime Rib at home

Very funny story thankyou.

From the beginning I was thinking that Brenda was having an affair and giving her husband guilt sex. It shows what jumping to conclusions can result in. Great 5 Star read!

That was creative and original, and very funny! Somehow, I expected him to still be in trouble with his wife in the end, even though it was her idea, but she turned out to be a great wife! Thanks for the story.

Brenda is a lovable and original character. Lots of situational humor and fun. Just a great feel-good story. Keep 'em coming.

That was a good one. I really like Brenda. She sounds like a good one.

Really funny little misunderstanding story, great fun!

What an entertaining story. Laughed hard and thoroughly enjoyed it.5*s.

Critics are assho,es. Let's see your writing.

What a fertile mind!

Another load of crap.

I think I am feeling a little light headed. Maybe I need some family medical assistance. Thanks for the smile!

I even saw the humor in the commenters who saw humer in the humor! (Does their spellcheck not work?)

Amused,

Paul in Oklahoma

Thanks,

MGM

Funny, funny. I loved it. Definitely 5 star worthy.

Now this is HDK in form! A hearty laugh and 5 stars.

Buhahahaa...lol. That was a good one!

Hilarious, well done.

It's a great thing, ladies... unless you don't use it properly, of course.

to read this man's work. Love HDK :-)

larious!

What's with the negative comments? This is fantasy; it's arousing, funny, and sweet--just like good sex.

I really enjoy your cute little romps like this one. Thanks again for another great laugh and happy ending.

Five stars for sure!

Geriatric sex I guess. Ewwww! Old man balls!

I want to read more stories like this. You have included hilarious situations in your stories that thrill me. I never get tired of reading them. Now this is the kind of entertaining stories I truly enjoy. Thank you so much.

Oh come on peoples! This is a very funny story! ! The sister and her husband wow ! Think about it your wife is offering her sister to Fuck you! Would you say no! Hell I would be so there Great story! Love you all! GREG. OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Of course facts and reality matter. Otherwise the story doesn't work. You remind me of that scene from Animal House...

Bluto: Over? Did you say "over"? Nothing is over until we decide it is! Was it over when the Germans bombed Pearl Harbor? Hell no!

Otter: Germans?

Boon: Forget it, he's rolling.

It's just a story damn it, and a good one at that.

Why is Stella not paying any consequences for releasing confidential medical information?

Can't anyone just accept the authors story as written? OMG, just go on and write your own story and post it. Write it however you like and then all the "What IFers" can spend endless hours dissecting and rewriting it.

Anyway, another 5* fun story by Harddaysknight.

Just My Opinion, YMMV

Morgan DeWolfe

I'm sorry, but no wife who was brought up as explained in the beginning of the story and loves her husband would offer up her sister to him. And this guy is dumb as a box of hammers if he thinks there isn't something behind this setup. At first I thought it was a get even fuck for her cheating on him. Some say 'Don't look a gift horse in the mouth', but I like to think more along the lines of 'Beware of Greeks bearing gifts' until you know the whole story. This could have ended with her demanding a 'free pass' after what he did even if she did push the point.

A true loving wife story and a loving family. I enjoyed it and gave it a five. KarenE's comment deserves a 10. It is so refreshing reading about people who know what love is and act accordingly. Thank you for a fine tale.

HDK at his best.

Every wife (and husband, for that matter!), should treat their mate as if they would be losing them soon.

Then we would have TRUE Loving Wives stories!

hilarious...

well deserving of 5 stars , really should have been in the humor & satire genre.

but ... by placing it in the loving wives , it actually made the story much more funny , because as a reader you are totaly thrown for a loop at the end .

simply Brilliant ... Outstanding.... i so wish there was more Hidden Jems like this one mixed into all the dark & angst filled Loving Wives section .

xxxhugsxxx

TwistedOliver.

a terrific woman, unselfish, loving, what state does the sister live in? nice story

A loving wife cared for her husband so much she wanted his last days to be incredible. Since he's not dying, will she be just as nice?

Ha

but what a way to go/cum..TK U MLJ LV NV

This was funny, as heck... I thought the wife was cheating the whole time LOL

Thanks for sharing.

except Uncle Buck. He didn't think it was funny!

A real loving wife.

Truly amazing.

He did "hit the lottery".

SHIT! My wife doesn't have any sisters! Cheers!

I enjoyed it very much. Gave you a 5.

Callie

i've been reading stories for a while now here in literotica,, this is the first time a story here made me actually laugh..you're good bro,, thnx