All Comments on 'I'm Trying to Write a Story'

A great little story. Your wife sounds just like mine

Ah -- a loving wife.

What a respite from cuck stories in LW

thanks 192trucker

Interesting fantasy idea, butvit jas been done before many timed, as long as it stays a fantasy between this couple all is good but knowing the stories on this site it probably won't. It always escalates to something more.

Who would want to read this... I would, and it is LOT BETTER than cuck shit that many writers start with!!

5 for encouragement.

I would too ;-)

Very nicely done, a story within a story and probably something that could actually happen in real life.

Charming

A clever twist, stream of consciousness narrative of a wonderful inspiration. A whole wheelbarrow's worth of mini-plot-lines, done with humor and grace. Lovely.

Fun read

Thank you for a rarely different kind of story. Doesnt happen too often any more.

Nice read!

Good story, but not Loving Wives category.

Can't say I agree with the current score - this was a fine story, great first effort. Write about what you know right? Yeah you can polish it some, you will get better. Don't stop writing...

I really like this! I wish there were more stories of wives being erotic with their husbands 👍🏽

Not often someone writes a truly unique story. I love it. Creative, well written, clever. Excellent.

I liked it. A real loving wife story. Good mental image creation and physically possible. What will be the next inspirational story for "I'm trying to write a story". I can imagine a number of stories to spin off of this one. But truth be told, the wife is the better writer. : )

As long as it stays just inspiration, and not a reality, it’s a good story.

Getting sick and tired of people like PhxSexFiend telling us what belongs in this category. Many readers like me think this is precisely the kind of story that belongs here, because the wife is a truly loving wife!

A nice story......first time I've come across a mix of two story lines like this. The wife connection was nicely descriptive but I think the lady/young man could have been more so which may have enhanced the whole story.

Nice all the same.